Writing
How can more detail be added to a paragraph?
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Let's see what you have learned so far about adding content to writing. The paragraph below could use some help. You don't need to rewrite the paragraph. Just give the writer some suggestions for how he could add more content to his writing. For example, he might need to explain what something looks like in more detail.
Read the paragraph below.
I took a hike yesterday. I saw lots of flowers while I was walking. There were many animals too. I walked all day until it started to get dark out. I knew it was time to head home. I can't wait to go back and explore some more!
What suggestions do you have for this author? How could he add more content to his paragraph?
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