The words you select can either help your readers see your story the way you want them to, or leave readers in the dark. Highly descriptive, very precise words help readers create pictures in their minds. You probably know that nouns name things and verbs state actions, and you may remember that adjectives modify nouns, while adverbs modify verbs. All of these parts of speech play key roles in description, but only if you choose just the right ones.
Which of the sentences below creates a clearer picture in your mind? Which one affects how you feel?
| Kevin picked up the dog. | Kevin tenderly lifted the injured poodle. |
Your choice of precise words can make a difference in meaning as well. Read these variations of the same sentence. Then click each sentence to see how the writer's choice of words is likely to affect readers.
| Lynn stood in the doorway, her lips twisted in an evil smile. | The writer's choice of twisted and evil may make readers wonder what terrible thing Lynn is going to do. |
| Lynn leaned in the doorway and flashed me an enchanting smile. | The precise verb and adjective give readers a positive feeling about Lynn. |
| Lynn stood triumphantly in the doorway, beaming a smile. | The reader understands that Lynn feels like she has won something. |
| Lynn slouched in the doorway with a grin on her face. | This verb may make readers wonder if there's something that Lynn might be hiding. |
| Lynn lingered uncertainly in the doorway. | This verb and adverb suggest that there may be some confusion or hard feelings between Lynn and the speaker. |
| From the doorway, Lynn flashed me a welcoming smile. | The writer's use of flashed and welcoming suggest that Lynn is happy to see the speaker. |
Question
Why does a narrative need description?
