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audio buttonHow do I start my rough draft for my descriptive paragraph?

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audio buttonYesterday, you picked your animal for your descriptive paragraph and you filled out your prewrite paper with details. Please find that paper now. You will need it to write your rough draft.

Now, let's go through the steps of writing your rough draft together. Go through each step on the tabs below.

Title

Topic Sentence

Body Sentences

Closing Sentence

audio buttonLet's start with a title. What animal did you choose to write about?

You could just name your paragraph after your animal, but you could also add some excitement to it.

audio buttonMy Cuddly Companion

Busy Beavers

The Wildest Animal at the Zoo

The World's Largest Mammal

audio buttonCan you come up with a creative title for your paragraph? Write your title now.

audio buttonWe need to begin our paragraph with a topic sentence. This sentence states the topic, which is your animal. Here are some example topic sentences.

audio buttonMy cat is my best friend in the whole world.

Beavers are the hardest working animals in the world.

Tigers may be fierce, but they are amazing animals.

audio buttonNow it's your turn! Introduce your paragraph by writing your topic sentence.

audio buttonNow it's time to add some details. Take a look at the questions you answered on your prewrite worksheet. These will help you build the body of your paragraph.

audio buttonHow do you know this animal?

This will help your readers understand why you chose this animal.

What does the animal look and feel like?

Details, details, and more details!

How does the animal act?

Even more details!

How does the animal make you feel?

This will also help the reader understand why you picked this animal to write about.


audio buttonIt's your turn! Write the body of your paragraph. Remember to include as many details as you can. This is a descriptive paragraph, so it should describe your animal very clearly.

audio buttonLet's wrap up your paragraph by writing a closing sentence. You are reminding the reader what your paragraph was about.

Let's look at some examples.

audio buttonMy cat may be a little crazy, but he's my best friend.

The next time you see a beaver, give him a pat on the back for all his hard work.

While I know I'll never be able to have a tiger as a pet, they will always be my favorite animal to visit at the zoo.

audio buttonThink about how you want to end your paragraph, and add your closing sentence.

audio buttonWhen you have finished your rough draft, please keep it in a safe place. We will be editing our rough drafts tomorrow.