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What is special about the way poets choose and use words?

An eager reader might skim a chapter in a novel to find out "whodunit" or to learn whether the lovers will live happily after. Poems, though, are not written for skimming. Compared to the writer of a novel, a play, or even a short story, the poet has a short space to introduce and develop an important idea—the poem's theme. That's why poets work so hard to choose just the right words. To see how carefully a poet chooses words, take a look at this Emily Dickinson poem—just 43 words long—about children at play.

Children jumping in the park on a sunny day.

From all the jails the boys and girls
   Ecstatically leap, —

Question

Two strong words are in the poem's first two lines: jails and ecstatically. What kind of "jails" might the "boys and girls" have escaped? Why are they ecstatic about their escape?

Children jumping in the park on a sunny day.

From all the jails the boys and girls
   Ecstatically leap, —
Beloved, only afternoon
   That prison doesn't keep.

Question

Now that you've read the next two lines, how do you understand the poem better? What words stand out to you in these lines?

Pupils racing on the grass outside.

They storm the earth and stun the air,
   A mob of solid bliss.

Question

Look at the verbs Dickinson chooses for these lines—storm and stun. They're so precise and vivid! What do these verbs suggest about how the children play?

Pupils in a huddle smiling down at camera outside.

They storm the earth and stun the air,
   A mob of solid bliss.
Alas! that frowns could lie in wait
  For such a foe as this!

Question

Look at the word that begins the poem's last two lines: Alas! This dramatic word choice expresses dismay. What upsets the speaker so much? What words help you understand?