Try revising some sentences to improve the flow or rhythm of the sentence. In the space provided, rewrite each sentence. At the end of this activity, after you have revised all of the sentences, compare your revisions to our sample ones.
Cautiously, quietly, and with respect, the cameraman approached the pride of lions.
Right over there there are several gopher holes.
Every new discovery in science advances our understanding a little further.
| Your Responses | Sample Answers |
|---|---|
| Cautiously, quietly, and respectfully, the cameraman approached the pride of lions. | |
| Right over there are several gopher holes. | |
| With every new discovery in science, our understanding advances a little further. |
