Before you edit your own narrative, practice identifying sentences that use quotation marks and colons correctly. If the writer has edited the sentence successfully, drag the sentence to correct. If the writer still has editing left to do, drag the sentence to incorrect.
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Iktomi shivered and whined "I wish I still had my blanket!"
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correct
incorrect
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"God will punish you for what you've done to me!" yelled Anne Hutchinson to the officials of Massachusetts Bay Colony.
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correct
incorrect
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Olaudah Equiano writes of terrible experiences: being kidnapped as a child, surviving the horrors aboard a slave ship, and being sold like a piece of cargo.
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correct
incorrect
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Captain John Smith's agenda: to encourage more English to settle in the New World.
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correct
incorrect
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Complete
Now, it's time to edit your own narrative and give it the polish a final draft deserves. Read through your narrative carefully, looking for any errors in grammar, usage, and mechanics. Then, focus on the two editing areas you just reviewed: punctuating dialogue and using colons to introduce lists and add explanatory information.

Make any necessary changes in your draft and be sure to highlight them. When you save this document, add the word EDITED to the document's file name.