Writing: Edit Paragraph
Look at the paragraph edits below. Then, edit your paragraph about your bedtime routine.
Goal:
Goal:
When editing, you fix spelling and punctuation. Make sure sentences begin with capital letters and end with periods.
Read the paragraph below. As you are reading, make any corrections that need to be fixed. Click the "Show Me" button to check your edits.
Bedtime is a zoo at my howse. I always help my parents with my brothers they are two. First, I take a bath and brush my teeth. Then I help my dad give my brothers a bath. Where i get wet again. The last thing we do is listan to my mom read a story. I sit in my brothers' room to listen. My mom carries me to bed if I fall asleep.
Bedtime is a zoo at my house. I always help my parents with my brothers. They are two years old. First, I take a bath and brush my teeth. Then, I help my dad give my brothers a bath, and I get wet again. The last thing we do is listen to my mom read a story. I sit in my brothers’ room to listen. My mom carries me to bed if I fall asleep.
Now, it is time to edit your last draft. You can decide if you would like to handwrite or type your edits. Choose what works best for you.